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    Saturday, December 8, 2007, 12:10 AM GMT [Poetry]

    This poem just came to me.beleive it or not i was looking at a sultry Jessica Galbreth painting when this came into my head!It doesn't have a title yet,any suggestions??

     

    She hid her sultry eyes

    And put away her charms

    A cover on the light

    Of self that shone so bright

     

    Of herself she left

    A shadow of what was

    What once sparkled

    Now hidden in the gloom

    A distant memory

    The echo of herself

     

    Let's hope she finds a guide

    A beacon in the dark

    Or else she may fade away

    A whisper on the wind. 

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    beautiful written!!
    I love jessicas work and it
    can be so inspirational for
    writers and artists :)

    Katerina
    December 08, 2007
    01:48 AM GMT

    oh wow this is so lovely thanks for sharing it fairy blessings rainbowsprite

    Jane/Tabi/fairygirl ...
    December 08, 2007
    06:09 AM GMT

    Dear Sarah, This is marvelous! And beautiful and sad. I dearly hope she DOES find a guide and a beacon.

    With Fond Thoughts-

    Tod
    December 08, 2007
    03:12 PM GMT

    This is beautiful. It makes me a little sad, but also it's hopeful.
    You say you are not a poet, yet your poetry is as moving and creative as many "professionals" I have encountered.

    Persnickety Pixie
    January 27, 2008
    08:46 PM GMT

    You are a poet and this is beautiful!

    Kim
    January 30, 2008
    12:01 AM GMT

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