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    THE MEETING

    Monday, June 9, 2008, 12:51 AM [General]

    THE MEETING

    I walked along the storm tossed shore
    Not sure what I was looking for
    And then I came around a bend
    And every other thought did end

    She stared at me imploringly
    And pointed down toward wounded knees
    Oh wait...not knees...but wounded tail
    And as I gazed my words did fail

    Silver fishes in her hair
    Iridescence everywhere
    A ring of crabs protective there
    Claws a-snapping in the air

    As I bent low she grabbed my hand
    I felt her need there in the sand
    And so I stayed for most the day
    And tended to her where she lay

    Somehow she transferred to my mind
    The memories of her own kind
    Pirate ships with wind filled sails
    Sailors weeping on the rails

    Mad sea monsters who'd obey
    Every word that she would say
    Kind octopi who gently sway
    Watching Merbabes as they play

    And as I woke from reverie
    I saw her wound had healed nicely
    The tide was turning...coming in
    She stretched and flexed her healthy fin

    Creatures waited in the sea
    Thousands waiting patiently
    A wave came in...my toes felt foam
    She kissed my cheek ...and floated home.

    4 (1 Ratings)

    I really enjoyed this. A great poem, something I wish I wrote. Keep 'em commin'!

    sleepy
    June 09, 2008
    04:48 AM CST

    Yes , a chance magical encounter , I enjoy it as well , thanks .

    W.J.Lexie
    June 09, 2008
    06:13 AM CST

    The Fideal...

    Friday, June 6, 2008, 01:17 AM [General]

    Here's the one that won second place for Best of Froud...Poet of the Year. (See flag below).

    It's one of my favorites...

     

    The Fideal

    She wanders through the lakeshore reeds
    searching for her lover
    promises broken   vows unkept
    now longing for another

    Her song seductive    trails behind
    quietly enchanting
    so men cant help but follow
    calling to her...weeping...panting

    Her kiss is earth    her skin the sky
    her eyes reflect the sea
    her touch is longed for   liquid
    lifeblood    electricity

    Her whispered verse thrums on the air
    calling the one she's missed
    she canna seem to find him
    yet she's sure he must exist

    He'll bind himself to only her
    he'll keep the vows he pledges
    He will not swerve in loyalty
    or love that he professes

    But she has yet to come across
    one strong enough as this
    and all the others still can taste
    her final burning kiss

    She leaves them trapped in briny depths
    forever eyes unseeing
    mouths filled with weeds    their broken hearts
    slowly    slowly     beating...

    0 (0 Ratings)

    very nice.

    sleepy
    June 06, 2008
    07:25 AM CST

    I'm glad you posted some more...I really like The Fideal, also. The picture on your Froud poet award looks very appropriate to go along with this poem! Thanks for the comments on my Faerie Dance picture.

    Susan Schroder
    June 06, 2008
    11:47 AM CST

    Hey I know this!! More please!!

    Hawk
    June 06, 2008
    07:51 PM CST

    Remember the Lost Ones...

    Friday, June 6, 2008, 12:58 AM [General]

    This one was inspired by something Ari Berk wrote in Faerie Mag once...

    REMEMBER THE LOST ONES...

    Remember the lost ones and those without names
    Remember the hungry and
    those who feel shame

    While you revel and warm yourselves
    with the hearth's flames
    Remember the banished and outcast

    Think of those standing outside looking in
    or walking the darkened moors
    empty within
    calling for you
    to forgive them their sins
    as you turn your back in judgement steadfast

    Once in a while
    look for those
    who've been lost
    throw open your door
    let the warmth melt the frost
    and ask someone in
    from the fringe of exhaustion
    to fill up their bone weary souls

    All of us started here
    muchly the same
    nobody starts their life
    in sin and shame
    so on this one night throw out
    all of your blame
    for the Goblins and Giants
    and Trolls.

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    Frustrated...

    Friday, June 6, 2008, 12:35 AM [General]

    I've had the great honor of winning Best of Froud...Poetry twice in the last couple of years.

    Once I won first place and the second time won second.

    They give you really cool banners to put on your website but I didnt have a website. I wanted to add them here but when I went to look for them I must have only saved the second place one.

    *sigh*

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    Hey There!!!
    Thanks for the add on.
    Have a Great day.

    Rodney
    July 29, 2008
    04:40 AM CST

    you rock Traci and your poetry too!

    xxxx

    Zoe
    June 18, 2008
    03:16 AM CST

    OH how I enjoyed reading your artful poetry! job well done! Thank you for sharing :-)
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    Sheila
    June 07, 2008
    06:59 PM CST

    Hi, I was enjoying all the wonderful artwork on Hawks site here at EF when I came across the poem "The Nutton" which he later informed that you wrote. I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it...my daughter and I were both very tickled by it. I hope you will post more here for us to enjoy! Susan

    Susan Schroder
    June 05, 2008
    11:06 AM CST

    Yay!!! Mermi's here!! Let the silliness and fun begin!!

    Angelia
    June 03, 2008
    06:03 PM CST

    Hello Mermaidlaughing, now I'm grinning! We appreciate you bringing your beautiful smile here =) Thank you for joining our EF community & sharing your enchanted photographs with us, Gwen looks adorable ;)
    More smiles & friendly Be waves,

    Be
    June 03, 2008
    09:52 AM CST

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